Wednesday, February 17, 2010

ELEMENTS TO MAKE A WRITER GREAT part 1

Often overlooked in writing, the topic sentence is a foundational ingredient that no paper should lack. Failing to properly introduce a subject in writing is like forgetting the butter in a cake recipe. Normally this ingredient goes unnoticed mixed with sugar and flour and vanilla, but when it is missing, the cake will simply not taste right. To achieve a smooth, moist, and cohesive texture, butter must be added and blended well. Likewise a topic sentence must introduce the gist of a concept and then flow easily into the material at hand. Generally, it is found at the beginning of a paragraph and tells the reader what the following sentences will be about. In some cases--usually in the middle or end of a paper--a transitional sentence needs to preface the topic sentence to help the audience segue to the next issue. The subsequent sentences should support the proposed topic by explaining the position taken or giving background, logical arguments, and examples which will lead the reader to come to the same conclusion as the writer. Again using the analogy of a cake, the body of a paragraph is similar to the other ingredients which are necessary to complete the dessert. Once mixed, the batter must be baked, definitively binding the elements together. So, finally, the concluding sentence should wrap up the concepts discussed and touch again on the same point as the opening sentence, bringing the paragraph back to the place it started and informing the reader through the process.


4 comments:

  1. You forgot to mention the chocolate; you are making chocolate cake, right? :-) You'll be teaching writing to the boys, won't you? Sadly, I never really learned to write well despite having an incredibly talented writer as a mother. I'm so glad that if it had to skip a generation at least my children could be the blessed recipients of her ability. Keep writing... keep sharing.

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  2. I like the baking analogy Caity. You're so creative, picking an analogy that fits so well and also fits with your interests; baking being one of them. That's very well written. Thanks for sharing. <3 hugs.
    ~Rissie

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  3. Caity! Great job. *Your* topic sentence was a model of a good one, and the resulting paragraph was "smooth, moist, and cohesive." The cake analogy was very interesting: I definitely would not have the brain cells to think that far and yet bring the point back home so seamlessly.

    Love,
    Medora

    P.S. As usual, I read your post after running (why does it always happen that way? I read the food posts when I'm starving...), so the mere mention of cake has me ready for dinner!

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